When peer reviewers and English collide
Please proofread the whole paper - there are several grammer and punctuation issues, MUCH better than before though - but still there.
This was followed in the same set of comments by:
4th paragraph - needs revision - you set up the paragraph so it sounds like youre only going to discuss post-menapause, but then start discussing pre-menapausal women.
Contributed by Stephen Gilliver